Hello and welcome back to listen its Asiah so, listen it's Asiah! In this blog I will be talking about my peer review changes as I talked about in my last blog. I had shown a couple people my video, this including family and friends. Once I showed it to my friends their initial reaction which was over all great. I was able to hit an emotional nerve which was good because it was the point. This was because over the emotional scenes that's were placed. When the feed back from this part was overall great but they did have so minor tweaks involving sound. There is overlapping in a bit so the recommended I clear up the sound. What I did with this comment was I placed the clips overlapping so that they were fading in and out and not all appearing on the screen at once. So they each developed on the screen one by one on there own. The feedback on how characters were developed led to a deeper look into why they do what they do and how they relate to each other, which made the story mo...