How the people felt seeing my film(review)

 Hello and welcome back to listen its Asiah so, listen it's Asiah! In this blog I will be talking about my peer review changes as I talked about in my last blog. I had shown a couple people my video, this including family and friends. Once I showed it to my friends their initial reaction which was over all great. I was able to hit an emotional nerve which was good because it was the point. This was because over the emotional scenes that's were placed. When the feed back from this part was overall great but they did have so minor tweaks involving sound. There is overlapping in a bit so the recommended I clear up the sound. What I did with this comment was I placed the clips overlapping so that they were fading in and out and not all appearing on the screen at once. So they each developed on the screen one by one on there own. The feedback on how characters were developed led to a deeper look into why they do what they do and how they relate to each other, which made the story more complex. People also suggested that the story should be more focused, so we removed parts that weren't really needed and made sure everything made sense. We also worked on the music and sounds to make the movie feel scarier and more intense. All of these changes together made the movie much more exciting and enjoyable for viewers. But overall the viewers did enjoy it and did not have much criticism. They thought most things were executed well and were actually intrigued to see a full movie of it. You any and every project has its flaws so even though to people that reviewed it did not find it doesn't mean that there are other things that can not be improved upon. If it were to be seen by another group of people. But that's all for now wonder what we'll talk about next. Also don't forget to listen it's Asiah!