Screen play

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Location of Scene: Office

Keylin

Will you guys stop it!

Location of Scene: Keylin's Mind

Sally

You know that if you don't straight you have a higher chance of falling over.

Vallesa 

No one asked, so shut up you baby!

Molly

Shut don't go up! Hahaha

Sally 

Ooooooh! She got you, burn.

Vallesa 

"rolls eyes"

Location of Scene: Office


Keylin

"Mumbling" Their gonna think I'm crazy. I can't be crazy I just can't be. Nothings wrong everything's gonna be fine you just need some fresh air.

Location of Scene: Keylin's Mind

Molly

It's funny she thinks she can stop us. "chuclks"

Sally 

"in between laughs" We're in your mind silly goose. You can't get rid of us.

Vallesa 

For once their right we are here to keep you crazy and no one will believe you not a single soul. Maybe this time we can get you to stay in this corner you think? Leave you till you rot an then finally your body rots and then you can have your peace you think? Deal?

Location of Scene: Office 

Keylin

"whispers" No no deal stop please stop 

Location of Scene: Keylin's Mind 


Sally 

This is what you get!

Molly 

This is what you deserve, don't you think? I mean for all my jokes you're a really good punch line.

Vallesa 

Of course she is look at her. Pathetic.

Sally 

What happen to never wanting to be alone?

Molly

Yea, don't you like us?

Vallesa 

What's wrong don't like what you see?

Location of Scene: Office Bathroom

Keylin 

no no I didn't want this not like this. I didn't mean to do this, to create you 

Location of Scene: Keylin's Mind

Molly 

I'm hurt and here I thought you like me all think time

Vallesa

Shut it Molly! You wont get rid of us you made us, we are you creations to be with and haunt you forever.... you were told there would be consequences .

Location of Scene: Office

Keylin

No, I going to fix this and you guys won't be able to stop me I am goin to fix my problem.

Location of Scene: Keylin's Mind

Molly,Vallesa,Sally

Good luck...

End of Scene




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